Saturday, April 14, 2007

Question Unanswered

Saw a lovely person
Fell in love all by sudden
Have you felt the pain...

The kiss was greatest
To have one, would I become meanest
Have you felt the pain...

The fire was burning twosome
Alas! One died and other a lonesome
Have you felt the pain...

The heart fancied a happy dream
Until a terrible nightmare scream
Have you felt the pain...

Clinging onto reed and drowning
Crying out for a little loving
Please, why don't you feel the pain...


Umm... I penned this on 23 November 1997.

3 comments:

Rubic_Cube said...

I see a lot here. Great poetry. Progressive, if I may.

Raghu said...

@ rubic_cube: Hi Rubic, thanks for dropping by and giving this wonderful comment. This verse reflects my state of mind when I wrote it. Your words are very encouraging.

Raghu said...

this is abslutely wonderful... specially " clinging on to reeds and drowning, crying out for a little loving " is touching... u make a great poet...