Saturday, July 29, 2006

Dark Symphony

Music of brittle sobs
Song of cold sighs
Jingle of broken prayers
Melody of silent cries

This is the symphony of pain
Without which a man is vain

4 comments:

Rubic_Cube said...

Mmmmm...
Concise is the only word I have for this one. Good one!

H.S. Dharmendra said...

Many of my poems talk about pain and hurt, I wonder why. May be I am prone to react to these emotions.

Raghu said...

this is FANTASTIC! now i might begin to hear the music of my pain whenever i cry!

dewdrop said...

I love this one, very nice